How much work are you willing to put into this? I don't think it is bad, but if you did some more read throughs of a script this video could have been much shorter. Not that it is too long, but you want to match the length to the length of the content and there were a lot of thinking pauses and linguistic stumbles that slowed things down a lot. The just buy the game section was some three times longer than it needed to be.
Just for your personal friends that's probably ok, but if you're hoping to reach as wide an audience as you can get then there's things you can do. I love these kinds of projects. Communication is so interesting.
I'm not really sure with how good I want it to be. There are already plenty of video series and podcasts covering this stuff from way more established (and respected) players. The chief reason I'm doing this one is to be a little more audience specific and more personal.
SO - I wanted to just do this as a podcast but I'm really concerned for how long each one is and how much attention I can get and hold for people I share it with. Funny gifs help, I don't think I'll be using video unless I really have something I have to SHOW them in the game, which isn't much right now.
I don't like scripts because I'd rather use points and discuss details I've placed inside points. I want to make it conversational, not sterile or impersonal. When I really don't like a take I record my idea again and paste in.